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Look What I Did, Was It Right
Contributed by
romance_pyro
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:49:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm Sorry
Sorry for what i did
All those times we were together
All those things we said
All the things we did
Was I right to fill you up
With joy and happiness
And Then only to let you fall
And walk away into the shawdows
It cant be right
The tears that ran down your face
How could I hurt you so
When all i wanted to do
was to make you smile and blush
That last night we spent together
I held you it seemed like forever
Never Wanting to let go
But knowing i had to
To go back where you might not see me again
To leave you after raising you so high
And watch you fall as i walk away
What i did I think was wrong
I got to close and let you stay
When i knew all along what would happen in the end.
And now i sit here far far away
With that moment still in my head
The moment of me and you my last day
I watched you cry and wiped the tears away
pulled you up and said its ok
And I hurt you once i dont want to again
But good bye is to hard to say
Could this be goodbye or mearly just farewell
I said what I said and i mean it to be true
Even though your still young my love is truely true
And ill be back one day to prove
That there will always be me and you
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2005-11-13 14:49:57]
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Re: Look What I Did, Was It Right
(User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:27:59 PM AEST
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Re: Look What I Did, Was It Right
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:19:34 PM AEST
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| Really nice piece of work. Your friend is clearly very special to you. |
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