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Bed of Nails
Contributed by
crimson_regret420
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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One last breath among the living,
One last tear of unforgiving,
Didn't you know the world would bleed?
Don't give in to the selfish need,
Please,
For me,
This idiotic world of fools,
Just hold my hand, walk among the ghouls,
These ghosts can never touch us here,
The present gone, your past is near,
Just please don't give in,
The clock will tick the timeless sound,
As you spin around and 'round,
The rain will wash away your fears,
As I wipe away my tears,
Can you hold me one last time?
Take a break from the endless rhyme,
Hug me close and whisper in my ear,
“It’s alright now, nothing to fear.”
This life is not a tragedy,
I can be your remedy,
You dance alone,
Soaked to the bone,
The rain yet to atone,
The jagged stone carved with you name,
The spark is gone that fueled the flame,
Voices from beneath black veils,
My heart left broken on a bed of nails.
Copyright ©
crimson_regret420
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2005-11-13 14:32:41]
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Re: Bed of Nails
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by Poetic_Influence on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:28:53 PM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Bed of Nails
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:59:36 PM AEST
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| Good poem |
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Re: Bed of Nails
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 08:55:28 PM AEST
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Good to see a new post from you! I haven't seen you on here in forever...I see you still have that sweeping flow to your rhymes, and emotions pleasantly running amok in your write. Nicely done!
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