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Here Dead Found
Contributed by
Alina
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:06:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The blood steadily seeping
The tears slowly creeping
The white has become stained red
The soul and fear beating
The silent dark breathing
The sink has once again bled
The cracks and the faces
Mirrors and dazed places
Are filling with heavy sorrow
The tile and the ground
The girl here dead found
Will never see tomorrow
I guess the pain was to deep
When the cruelness does creep
Way down deep into the heart
She didn't really know
How to let it all show
And now it's ripped her apart
Lying in pieces
Full of dieseases
She desperately sought a way out
Feeling so needless
Neck wrapped in the noose's kiss
She eternally screams and shouts!
Copyright ©
Alina
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2005-11-13 14:06:40]
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Re: Here Dead Found
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:43:14 PM AEST
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A thought provoking piece of poetry that is packed with alot of emotion. I like the way u presented this. Well done and keep penning.
*hugs*
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Re: Here Dead Found
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:33:17 PM AEST
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Certainly does make you sit up and pay attention.
A lovely yet chilling weaving of words in this.
Well done
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Re: Here Dead Found
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 07:20:05 PM AEST
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excellent. packed with so many things. just wish i could tell feelings like that through poetry. good job
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Re: Here Dead Found
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:20:23 PM AEST
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Beautifully written!! I love the rhyming scheme as it
wraps wonderfully around the core of emotions.
I hope you keep up the excellent writing and I'll be
sure to read more and more
Oh, and my favourite lines were:
The cracks and the faces
Mirrors and dazed places
Are filling with heavy sorrow
The tile and the ground
The girl here dead found
Will never see tomorrow
Well woven words... |
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