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Unless
Contributed by
Crys
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ThankYouPoems
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No one could ever understand how I feel,
Unless they experience it as me.
No one can say that they can relate,
Unless, through my eyes, they can see.
No one can see the struggle I face every day,
Unless they are right beside me.
No one can see these tears on my face,
Unless, behind the mask, they can see.
No one could ever taste the fear like I have,
Unless they are there to protect me.
No one can ever see through to my darkness,
Unless, over my wall, they can see.
No one ever saw the razor at my wrist,
Unless they were there to stop me.
No one can ever be there like you have,
Unless, through you, they can see.
No one can ever understand why I stopped,
Unless they know what you’ve told me.
No one can open my eyes like you have,
The true meaning to life, I can see.
No one could ever understand how I feel,
Unless they experience it as me.
And no one will ever compare,
‘Cause only you have ventured to see.
For this, I thank you;
For being that “no one” who can.
And also, I thank you,
With you, I understand…
There is no “Unless”…
Copyright ©
Crys
... [
2003-01-22 19:00:00]
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Re: Unless
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by Lia on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:33:38 AM AEST
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| I have felt that way before..and I have been lucky enough to have a friend there to help me through it all |
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Re: Unless
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 07:29:28 AM AEST
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| Nifty. I like how you explained your point of view of the matter |
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Re: Unless
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:43:38 AM AEST
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| beautifully sad poem... i love your rhyming style using "me" and "see"... blessings... |
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