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It's Me Infront of the Sun
Contributed by
True-to-the-Heart
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:10:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Something has happend
I cant begin to explain
Its like a shadow has formed between us
And I am the one to blame
There runs another tear
and I guess this is my fault
To many and my eyes are burning
now this journey has come to a hault
the trembles are strong
And out jump my deepest insides
Theres no lengthy rod to grasp
so down the thick blood slides
And now a fence has been built between us
and the bullets are in the gun
Theres a shadow,its formed between us
and Its me infront of the sun
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True-to-the-Heart
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2005-11-13 04:10:21]
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Re: It's Me Infront of the Sun
(User Rating: 1 )
by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:14:01 AM AEST
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Wow! It's realy good. You expressed your feelings really well. Good Job.
Keep at it ^_^ |
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Re: It's Me Infront of the Sun
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:13:15 AM AEST
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| wow, amazing write, fits my circumstances very well at this moment. |
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