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Lost Within
Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 12:03:10 AM in AEST
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It’s all wary,
Memories,
Me,
You.
I can’t focus,
You,
Me,
Alone.
I can’t find,
Me,
You,
The light.
I’ve fallen,
Away from you,
Away from me,
Lost in eternity.
I’ve lost,
You,
Me,
Alone.
I’ve once loved,
A passionate love,
That’s turned to hate,
A menacing hate.
I’m lost inside myself,
No where to turn,
The only thing I can find,
Are the dead ends.
I’m lost within,
Fallen from love,
I can’t find myself,
I can’t stop hating me.
I’ve forgotten,
Your presence,
Your face,
Your memory.
I’m lost within myself,
No heart to find the way,
I can’t help but hate myself,
For losing you.
Copyright ©
Mild_Tempest
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2005-11-13 00:03:10]
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Re: Lost Within
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by spazie on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 12:38:57 AM AEST
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| very well written |
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Re: Lost Within
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by Alibi on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:48:37 AM AEST
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| Very well written, and in a style your own too. I like this poem! Good use of expression, and that last line sticks in the readers mind. Good poem! |
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Re: Lost Within
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 08:23:22 AM AEST
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this is facinating i love the prelude to the actual poem it sneaks up on you very provacaitive indeed the straight fowardness and unsettling way you display your hurt, very
well written and revealing in it's emotional
effect it had on me while i was reading it.
Ben
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Re: Lost Within
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 06:18:17 PM AEST
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Very well written...I could feel your pain...
God Bless! |
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