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Are you ready?
Contributed by
tatikaze
on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 09:48:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Anticipating your company,
stuck here alone,
My yurning for her,
will never be known.
Recent events,
actions that have been seen,
The fingers will soon point,
towards you and me.
Our feelings have merged,
and our hearts will soon,
Are you ready?
For people to sway to our tune?
Never forgetting,
the times we had shared,
Alone together in the dark,
always being aware.
Clear now are our intentions,
for I've had doubts,
Blinded and clouded,
from our lustfull cries and shouts.
Are you ready,
For all of my heart?
Are you ready,
For our new era to start?
Copyright ©
tatikaze
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2005-11-12 21:48:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Are you ready?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alibi on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:07:28 AM AEST (User
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A spelling error you may want corrected:
yurning is spelled yearning.
This was a little ambiguous in areas, such as the second stanza. Maybe shedding some more light on the situation would give this love poem more depth. It sounds exciting, and positive either way, so best wishes! |
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