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Who Can Save Her?
Contributed by
The_Poetress
on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 07:49:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She is afraid
of aloneness.
Fearful, it will
stalk and taunt her
without remorse.
So, she remains
in fantasy,
pretending
her frog's a prince;
accepting
fragmented love;
and lacking
the self-esteem
to request more.
No one can save
her from such a
captivity
of mind and heart,
when she has not
admitted she's
a prisoner.
Copyright ©
The_Poetress
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2005-11-12 19:49:14]
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Re: Who Can Save Her?
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 08:22:34 PM AEST
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I feel sorry for this girl...no one should think so little of themselves. If you don't love yourself, you can bet your *** no one else will either!
Hopefully she realizes that soon...Nice job expressing yourself...Keep up the writes : )
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Re: Who Can Save Her?
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by Poetic_Influence on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 09:29:12 PM AEST
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| that prince will come someday |
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Re: Who Can Save Her?
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:20:45 PM AEST
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Interesting write............but the only one who can save her is herself.She has to believe in herself first !!
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Re: Who Can Save Her?
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 06:37:21 AM AEST
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And that is the worst kind of prisoner. May she someday see the chains for what they are, may her heart be freed.
Take care.
David |
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