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Down the drain
Contributed by
poetic_influence
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Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 05:00:15 PM in AEST
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Still as the night
Thats how I stand
As suddenly I am slipping away
Like an hour glasses sand
I cannot handle this
The arguements and the bull "Shh"
The "I'm sorrys" and " I didnt mean to do this"
How could you do that
Be alone...with her
We were married...or do you not remember
You know...that ring u slipped on my finger
Just about as easily as she slipped her hands on your...
Tell me...that was the point
"Oh you have no answer"
Are you born to disappoint
Just a natural born disaster
I knew all along
That the only thing you were doing was doing me wrong
Find you at work on the phone
Always walking out of the house with fresh cologne
Ready to talk to a woman unknown
You must have a heart of stone
How long have we been together?
And you still are a child
You could fill an ocean with all my tears compiled
We had a kid but do you care?
While i was in the hospital..were you there?
Always worrying about me like I cheated
Like yoou were the one who should be heated
Then you get mad when i mension the girls names
But you are the on who messed up so why do you complain
On my heart you left a stain
And you expect me to be the same
I can't do that
Why should I?
You dont deserve it
You did the crime now you have to serve it
When we mad love I cried
And were the lies were denied I felt like my soul died
My mother warned me
And I can't say she didnt
You have torn me
I wish when I signed my love ont he dotted line...That I had read the fine print
So here I am
Broken in two
Tell me
What did I get myself into
If I stay...I pay
If I leave..I grieve
I know what I need
But its like watching a cut bleed
You know it hurts you
But you watch it in amazement
You see that you alive
But at the same time filled with torment
So God...
Should I stay or go
These are the things I wish I could know
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Re: Down the drain
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by loopylou on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 05:21:09 PM AEST
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| wow, you can really feel your pain through this. Poetry is a great way of venting....good vent |
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Re: Down the drain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 05:46:26 PM AEST
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A very heart felt, touching and sad write. A lot of relationships - including marriages end this way. I can't exactly say why, I've been on both ends - the victim and the guilty. But all in all, don't blame yourself, if you held strong, until now, you deserve the release, don't hold onto someone who won't hold you back. If you do, you're just setting yourself up for more pain, once you let go, it'll be hard, but you'll soon realize it was the right decision, and he'll realize he blew his chance. Great write, keep your chin up, and I hope things work out for the better.
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Re: Down the drain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 09:01:07 PM AEST
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I can see a thousand poems here, all screaming to get out.
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Re: Down the drain
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by inoc on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:25:42 AM AEST
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Great write on a sad life situation...
I hope everything works out for you, and your child...
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