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goodnight
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 03:20:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dont blame yourself
for what I have done
you were perfect in everyway
I am cursed
pleaged by demons
eating away my soul
I tried to supress it
pretending their not there
I failed
The demons won
takin over
my body and soul
So now I must say goodnight
for the last time
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vampyrekiss
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2005-11-12 15:20:17]
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Re: goodnight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 03:24:11 PM AEST
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I think this is sad,
But this is a good poem!
Well done!! |
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Re: goodnight
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by Dorrian_Malcavalia on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 03:59:17 PM AEST
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| personally I think that you did a good job simple and elegant sad yet not depressing, I like it. |
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Re: goodnight
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by sleepykisser on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:39:41 AM AEST
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| the simplicity is moving; dont underestimate your talent! i like it |
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