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Whisper
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 03:10:48 PM in AEST
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I whisper with anger.
I have no answer.
I know It will get better.
But I know there is no catcher to your whisper.
There is a crier in your whisper.
So I go and eat a cracker.
I go and talk to the cooker.
I just wished It would get cooler.
I am such a failure.
vanilla Is my Flavor of Icecream.
The longer I sit here the longer your whisper Is.
I feel like such a looser,
IT matters to me.
When there is so many liar's.
But the whisper is so cold.
Copyright ©
butterflygirl40
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2005-11-12 15:10:48]
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Re: Whisper
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 03:13:38 PM AEST
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If you read my poems! can you comment
me ... Thanks.
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Re: Whisper
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 07:13:14 PM AEST
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Well, this is rather abstract! Your words still drew me in somehow, even if it doesn't entirely make sense to me. It's unique, if nothing else, and my curiousity has been piqued. May this 'whisper' continue...
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Re: Whisper
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 08:11:22 PM AEST
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Interesting write that. :-) The reader becomes almost in traced with the depth of your longing not to be lost. Vanilla is white and clean cool and crisp but it dont satify the thirst. Thanks fer sharing
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