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The Gift
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 12:54:28 AM in AEST
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He came to me
Was here last light
Held my hand
Swore it would be all right
With soft spoken words
And deep trust in His eyes
He spoke of a place
Where serenity lies
I finally spoke up
For I desired it bad
My sould was aching
For this peace He had
With such a beautuful gift
I asked why to me He came,
He relpied, "I am yoiur angel
And Death is my name.
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Re: The Gift
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by grim6669 on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 01:22:29 AM AEST
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oooooOOOOOOoooo...i like it alot....i especially like how it ends up....like the part about i am your angel and death is my name....that is awsome.....you should check out my poems soon....i think you'll like them.....so yeah....um....this poem was awsome!!!... keep it up and good job....!!!!
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Re: The Gift
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by Shattered_soul on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 05:44:00 AM AEST
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That was insane, so much in so little, I really like the end also, that was awasome, and umm happy b-day (hee hee cheezy I know)
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