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Prisoner of Perfection
Contributed by
de5tructo
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Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 12:52:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Your staring at the mirror.
Theres something they cant see.
Wondering whats this disgusting thing.
Looking back at me.
Its presence since faded.
Yet transparent to the deranged.
The beauty makes you suffer.
Theres no going back because youve
changed.
So revise this copy.
A change that punctures your heart.
You beat yourself for others.
Just to be torn apart.
The image becomes distorted.
It melts in your mind.
Theres no telling whats next.
Hit stop then rewind.
Going back to the void.
Theres something worse yet new.
Your persistence astonishes.
Still youve changed but for whom?
Now back to the mirror.
And seeing what they want to see.
Appearance is all the matters.
Their slave youll always be.
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de5tructo
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2005-11-12 00:52:26]
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Re: Prisoner of Perfection
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by grim6669 on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 01:29:03 AM AEST
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that poem is awsome...especially this part..."So revise this copy.
A change that punctures your heart.
You beat yourself for others.
Just to be torn apart.".....that part is really cool to me for some reason...yeah....me and you would get along great because our poetry is kinda alike...you should check mine out sometime...i'm pretty sure you'd enjoy reading them...yeah...well anyways you poem was freakin' awsome!!! good job and keep it up!!!
*~amber~*
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Re: Prisoner of Perfection
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by musicisluv7 on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 11:35:55 AM AEST
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Wow that is so wonderful
It made me think. Thanks for sharing
much luv x |
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