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Too Many Shadows
Contributed by
True-to-the-Heart
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Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 12:16:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Too many shadows..are here tonight,
bathing in tears, drinking the blood...
...my blood....your blood......their blood.
Our blood.
Just like when the moon comes down..
it sings a tune for the tainted.
''When all is lost, and broken...
The pieces...they get shattered,
the shattered...the get crushed.
The lovers, the get battered..
The loving turns to lust..
and all the pretty children..
left decaying in the dust...
still dance in loving passion,
despite the lovers rust...'
and the many carry on living..
the bleeding..they never stop.
The criers are never heard quiet,
the down never reach the top.
And no matter what time of year it is,
the liars will carry on lying..
Yes...no matter what name today may have
Im afraid I'll carry on dying.
Copyright ©
True-to-the-Heart
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2005-11-12 00:16:13]
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Re: Too Many Shadows
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 12:32:20 AM AEST
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| a truly brilliant write, well done |
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Re: Too Many Shadows
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by grim6669 on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 01:34:08 AM AEST
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''When all is lost, and broken...
The pieces...they get shattered,
the shattered...the get crushed.
The lovers, the get battered..
The loving turns to lust..
and all the pretty children..
left decaying in the dust...
still dance in loving passion,
despite the lovers rust...''.................wow!!!
i really really really love it!!!
*~amber~*
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