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aint gonna talk

Contributed by nannerz on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 10:12:35 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

its all on me now
im kinda scared
Im on the spot

I have to make a stand
to prove my point

No little slut
is gonna talk smack
and get away with it

You will be my example
when others think about it
theyll say
"did you see that girls face"

You wont even be recanizable
when Im done with you
and the only way Im gonna stop

Is when your not breathing
Ill pull out your tounge
so you wont be able
to talk anymore

trust me *****
you ******* ***** off
the wrong person

Cause like I said
aint no little slut
gonna talk ***** about me

Copyright © nannerz ... [ 2005-11-11 22:12:35]
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Re: aint gonna talk (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 11:16:42 PM AEST
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well there are innocent and impressionable eyes on this site, and i dont see why someone would post this for any reason. if anything, you are just going public with death threats and how someone shouldnt handle a situation. i think you have it in you to take whatever they said like a man/woman and not like a child. afterall the other person seems childish enough and doesnt seem to know right from wrong at all, but i only see this person through your point of view. i dont think this is a poem at all, and i think its a rant that would have been best unposted, because i for one dont see any reason to visit your poetry again. i have seen rant poetry pulled off with some type of class, but i dont see it here. the only good thing i have to say about this is that i felt your anger. if you think that this rant is good enough for revision, than i might suggest rhymes, rhythm, less cussing, portraying yourself in a more mature light, better syntax, and/or an original style.

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