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Funny
Contributed by
Blu
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Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 03:16:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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And isn't it funny
that you still think
that I don't know
where your eyes go
even when you can't blink
But you're still a good boy
and I'll always be your young toy
so stop curlin' those lips
there's deception in your hips
oh god, I'm good at bein' coy
When I can still glow
and move real real slow
so now even you can match my pace
but you're down so low
you can't look me in the face
So isn't it funny,
honey?
When the fruit you taste
is your own disgrace
and there isn't enough water
in the seven seas to wash down your shame
but I'll smile all the same
Just wait till I get you back
you think you've seen the blackest black
but honey, belive me the blood will run
'cuz I ain't finished havin' my fun
And you'll think it's real funny
honey
when your down in the ground
and I'm standin' proud
sayin "I told you so"
you shoulda never let me go
No one will take it like I did
no, not any of your internet kids
they're boys alright
and I'm sure you sleep tight
'til you realize
That it's no longer funny
honey.
Copyright ©
Blu
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2005-11-11 15:16:17]
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Re: Funny
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by Kayan on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 03:40:28 PM AEST
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Wow Blu, very angry. The interesting rhyme scheme flows together very nicely.
Does he know how angry you are? Surely if he did he wouldn't think it was very "funny" haha.
Splendid write, as usual.
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Re: Funny
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by Poetic_Influence on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 08:16:20 PM AEST
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