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The First Time
Contributed by
kaiba
on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 01:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The first time I looked into your eyes
My heart skipped a beat
Just long enough to let me know that
You are the one that I have been waiting for
The one who has been haunting my thoughts
Even though I had never met you
The first time that I kissed you
Time stopped
It was the best moment in my life
The first perfect kiss I had stolen
The only kiss to rattle my soul
The first time I held you close
I knew you were the one
I wanted to experience life with
To always be there
The first time we made love
I knew I was the luckiest man in the world
Forever was all too real
The first time we were one
I could hardly believe it was true
I will always love you
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kaiba
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2005-11-11 13:37:23]
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Re: The First Time
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 03:33:09 PM AEST
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| I still get butterfiles when i read this, hehe, Very heartfelt and beautiful wirte. Can't wait to read more of your work!! Welcome to YPDC!!!! |
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Re: The First Time
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by Shattered_soul on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 03:43:07 PM AEST
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Ok personaly, I LOVE your writing, I love the way it has no rhym (its my favroite kinda poetry) welcome to YPDC and i will be looking forward to more of your pieces.
~S.S |
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Re: The First Time
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by DreamPoetess on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:40:50 AM AEST
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Drew, you are a romanticist, no way out of it. Your heart sure knows how to write a poem:>
I love thes two lines:>
Just long enough to let me know that
You are the one that I have been waiting for
It is so wonderful, your heart just knew that:>
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