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Until Then I wait
Contributed by
poetic_influence
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Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:40:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'd tell you how I feel
But I've never been good with words
And I'd be more than happy to reveal
But my voice is so shy that it would never be heard
I'd write you a letter
But the pen would never touch the page
I'd knit you a sweater
But I'm so bad at sewing that I could never engage
I cannot tell you that I love you
Because I have no idea how
Even though its long overdue
I just do not think that I can do it now
You are so perfect
And I..am not
You are so worth it
You make my heart drop
You've never seen me
Because I always hide
But I wait so eagerly
For the day that I can confide what I feel inside
But until then
I wait
For my perfect 10
To be my soulmate
I may not be the prettiest
But I promise you forever
And I may not be the best dressed
But for your love I am very clever
You may not be impressed
And thats ok
For now I'll just wait
And pray
For a love that could be so great
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Re: Until Then I wait
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 01:54:27 PM AEST
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Very nice write, relatable. I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Until Then I wait
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 05:59:55 PM AEST
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Such a deep and heartfelt write. Beauty comes from the depths of ones heart. I hope you tell this person how you really feel about them. If you don't you'll regret it for a very long time. People should love you for who you are. Not for your looks or dress code, but for what's in your heart. Goodluck and may things work out for you. Otherwise a very well expressed poem. Well done.
*hugs*
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