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The wind
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 08:21:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Outside the wind howls
In the silenced night of fear
It looks for
Nobody knows what
Furious
He knocks on the doors
That deny to him
Hard and indifferent.
Abandoned, sad
He cries the tears
Of the rain that He calls
It softens His face
Without form
And His stormy soul.
He moans slowly
Following his march
Of grieving
Without time
Copyright ©
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-11-11 08:21:24]
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Re: The wind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 12:46:52 AM AEST
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This is a most lovely poem very intence the tittle got me so i read it and i enjoyed the episode nice style u have, it reaches out and beckons one 2 follow . . .
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Re: The wind
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 08:15:26 PM AEST
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Nice write this . Good flow . Readers feels the emotion.
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Re: The wind
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by sleepykisser on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:51:45 AM AEST
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| i like it; great rhythm , flow and word choice. nice work! |
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