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taylor made
Contributed by
Dizza_13
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Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 05:37:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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For this eggshell,
Cased,
Bliss inside unaware, Tip-toe
Trip and fall, crush
Never mind, there are more
Find another like me.
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
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2005-11-11 05:37:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: taylor made
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 09:46:52 PM AEST (User
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this is probably one of the more interesting and most intriguing poems ive read lately. the title i think is quite appropriate for it also. i also liked the length....i cant seem to handle poems over 3 stanzas anymore ::sigh:: |
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Re: taylor made
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:05:55 PM AEST (User
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This is an awesome neat poem, I like the message to it. I can relate to this one too hehe.
Take care.
Scott |
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