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THE BAD MISTAKES I HAVE MADED IN MY LIFE!!!.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:08:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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MY HEART ACHES WHEN I THINK OF ALL OF THE BAD MISTAKES I MADED IN MY LIFE.
I AM NOT PROUD OF MY BAD MISTAKES.
I USED TO AWAKE WITH A HEARTACHE OF HOW BAD I HURT YOU.
I USED TO SIT UP TO DAYBREAK .
I USED TO GET ALOT OF EARACHES ,WHEN YOU YELLED.
I AM TALKING ABOUT MY EX HERE.
I PUT ON BRAKES ,, AND MY MISTAKES,, NO MORE FOR ME.
THERE IS ALOT OF FAKES IN LIFE, i LEARNED THAT TO LATE.
I USED TO GET HEADACHES JUST THINKING HOW I DID YOU.
I USED TO SIT AT THE LAKE AND THINK OF ALL OF MY BAD MISTAKES.
NOONE MAKES YOU MAKE THOSE MISTAKES BUT YOU.
THERE USED TO BE ALOT OF OUTBREAKS .. CAUSE OF MY BAD MISTAKES.
THERE USED TO BE ALOT OF REMARKS .....
I USED TO SHAKE WHEN I KNEW THERE WAS GOING TO BE MORE OUTBREAKS.
I USED TO WATCH THE SNOWFLAKES COME DOWN AND THINK OF MY MISTAKES.
I KNOW MY EX TAKES NO MORE OF MY MISTAKES ARE LIES.
I USED TO GET TOOTHACHES AND HEADACHES .
WHEN I WAKE MY MIND GOES BACK TO MY BAD MISTAKES.
THE WIND BREAKS AND MY MIND SHAKES.
THERE WILL BE NOMORE BAD MISTAKES ...
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2005-11-11 00:08:39]
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Re: THE BAD MISTAKES I HAVE MADED IN MY LIFE!!!.
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:42:40 AM AEST
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LOOK IF YOU ARE GOING TO READ MY
POEM!!!! CAN YOU PLEASE LEAVE ME
A COMMENT,,,,, THANKS:)
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Re: THE BAD MISTAKES I HAVE MADED IN MY LIFE!!!.
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by Shattered_soul on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 01:16:48 AM AEST
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I am a bit of a picky reader, I dont think that you have to make your poem rhym and it looks to me like you tried, but all in all i liked it...
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Re: THE BAD MISTAKES I HAVE MADED IN MY LIFE!!!.
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by Mangs on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 04:14:15 AM AEST
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| amen to that.. :-) no more bad mistakes |
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