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Tales of a First Grade Nothing
Contributed by
ChibiMiroku
on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 11:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Tales of a First Grade Nothing:
For much of first grade, I was entranced;
Enraptured by my very own little romance;
Yet as I reminisce, and call it all back,
I can but try and puzzle out what we both lacked.
I remember you always beat me soundly
In all our many games of Yahtzee;
I remember holding you oh so tenderly;
(While we played Humpty Dumpty);
I remember running off with you
And telling no-one where we’d been;
I remember our hot and sweaty nights
(While we played on your old jungle gym);
I remember your hair mixed with mine
As we made snow angels in the grass
I thought you’d be happy when I popped the question
But instead, you said, “I hoped you’d never ask”.
So now, another question has its debut;
Before you left, you never told me adieu;
But seeing as how I have not yet forgotten you;
Can you say that you remember me too?
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ChibiMiroku
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2005-11-10 23:08:45]
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Re: Tales of a First Grade Nothing
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 04:59:36 PM AEST
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Vincent such beautiful memories, yet such a sad ending. It's evident that you still have feelings for this girl. Your poem speaks from the heart. An outstanding heartfelt write. Always a treasured experience to read such remarkable work by a very talented poet.
Who knows what the future brings and what paths we end up taking.
*hugs for you my friend*
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Re: Tales of a First Grade Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 06:31:40 PM AEST
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| Good poem, sad heart...and hard memories to live with...hang tight. there's something better |
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