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Life's Truths
Contributed by
kegs04
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Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
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Life really suxs
but there isnt anything we can do
we just keep going
you keep going
thats all it takes
is one step
one step
keep on
ur half way there
keep going
dont let them down
you cant let them down
they are counting on you
keep on
keep on
everyone lies
its all lies lies lies
everyone lies no one is completely trust worthy
who can you trust? who is trust worthy?
lies lies lies are you worthy of my trust? who do you trust? can you trust?
its all lies lies lies
why?
blame
its all lies lies lies
How are we supposed to live? How are we supposed to keep on?
Its all a conspiracy of lies and blame
Screw it all
Why bother?
Bother none
bother none
No reason
Why go on?
Keep your step, step no more
Just leave
You can go go go
It all on my blame
Blame
blame
blame
Copyright ©
kegs04
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2003-01-22 14:20:00]
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Re: Life's Truths
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by AzurePaladin on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 03:26:41 PM AEST
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such a sense of being lost, and of frustration i see here.... very well written, the style really furthers the emotion behind it. if you are ever in need of an ear, let me know.... :) i have been through that as well...
nice write. |
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Re: Life's Truths
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:13:17 PM AEST
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| i like this poem very much... |
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Re: Life's Truths
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by plous on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 09:06:53 PM AEST
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| its like a circle or crap huh, well you dont have to be that way. |
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Re: Life's Truths
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:36:34 AM AEST
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Very simple, very blunt, and very true. Sometimes i hate living for others and you sound sort of the same. Keep yer chin up...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Life's Truths
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by M on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:19:11 AM AEST
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| it's so true, u can really see your emotions, i love it |
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Re: Life's Truths
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by kegs04 on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 02:47:32 PM AEST
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what do you mean by I "dont have to be that way"? I didnt really understand that, if you could elaborate, it'd be great, thanx...
~peace out
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Re: Life's Truths
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 12:36:44 PM AEST
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Kegs, Now thats the best yu've written (I've been reading you the wrong way round from last to forst)
That is an excellent critique of modern society. I have not read better |
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Re: Life's Truths
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by kegs04 on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 12:48:41 AM AEST
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i thank you for this comment. I have always not been sure about my writing. I have many insecurities with it, and it takes a lot for me to put my work on this site, knowing that people i do not know, are reading it and forming opinions on it. I know we had severe disagreements on "too thin" but hopefully we can see past that.
.. thanks again, it means a lot.
~kegs
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