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nothing to lose
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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the tears wont stop
and i'm alone...
like always
i have nothing to show
or lose
so i sit
staring at the mirror
not wanting to really see
i chose my weapon
i change myself again
no one will ever know me
and the pain
the repetitive pain
screaming inside
pushing my real self aside
wanting to stop
not wanting to see
wanting to have someone else to depend on
other than me
waiting
not wanting to be alone...
like always
i have nothing to show
or lose
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
... [
2005-11-10 21:49:03]
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Re: nothing to lose
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:58:20 PM AEST
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| So sad but very well written! |
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Re: nothing to lose
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:14:04 AM AEST
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THIS IS SUCH A SAD POEM! BUT ITS IS
VERY GOOD. AND WELL WRITTEN.. |
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Re: nothing to lose
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by weepingprophet on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 02:38:14 AM AEST
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a joy to read. ironic.
~pain lies within us all, it is the realization-that we are alive~weepingprophet |
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Re: nothing to lose
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 10:36:20 AM AEST
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i like it its sad but really good
DEMON |
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