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Daydreams Of The Night...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:34:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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As the sun it softly fades
Awakening dusk with a tender kiss
Night slowly begins to settle
As stars twinkle with sheer bliss
My eyes they look up to the sky
As again I reverie of you
The wind it plays me an octet
It sings away my blues
The moon is now my spotlight
For once I am the star
As my mind drifts into dreams
Wondering where you are
Are you thinking of me
In this precise moment of time
Somewhere in another place
Is your heart the same as mine
Although this is the dark of night
My heart finds a glimpse of you
Your brilliant shine, your loving light
To me it comes shining through
For you are, the core of my love
Though to see you I have never
But, you will always be in my heart
My love forever and ever
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:13:31 PM AEST
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Amazing write, loving and touching, very sweet, captivating. Loved it.
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by ChibiMiroku on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 10:53:11 PM AEST
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Well done, as usual!
I liked the tone of the poem the most....how it was romantic, but more sweet and melancholic than gooey and mushy. ^^
Great write, all three of you! |
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 11:01:12 PM AEST
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a divine trilogy and well crafted splendid in every sence of the word, beautiful tri colaboration sue and ed and of course the eminent raquel . . .
(((((2uall)))))
Ben |
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 05:41:34 PM AEST
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Oh How very touching, loving and heartfelt. Congratulations to you three........wonderful poets all of you too!
Loved it so well had to read it again.
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 06:36:24 PM AEST
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Nice! Such sweet, and wistful thoughts here...I love the vibe to this piece...It's tender, longing, hopeful, and bursting with affection. Good job you three!!!
I like the title too : )
Scorp. |
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:33:27 AM AEST
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Is this not amazing, three people was told to write one stanza.. and we all submitted to each other, and we all have had one thought in mind... A dream, day, shifting into the night... looking for something we have never laid eyes on, now I think this is outstanding... Sue, Eddy, my friends, I can never repay you for your sweet company, your love, your friendship... I pray we can always stay close, and write away... I tell you, Sue, Eddy, your folks are so wonderful to me... my husband, he reads this, he goes, wow.... he thinks we cheated, like we were playing some card game lol. lol... well, thank you... its late... I know, I have been busy.. check you out later... gatorssssssssss... lol, excuse my french, I am hurry write to this, and I say, an aussie, and englishman, we do it good it.. lol lol... when i have too more much time, i do it english better up... I can no do it, I am too sleepy, hit the bed... I see you to day it tomorrow...
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by DreamPoetess on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 04:38:50 PM AEST
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Hello Sue: This is one gorgeous write everyone:>
Meagan:> |
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:16:09 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem!! It's absolutely perfect in it's theme
throughout... what more can i say but that my hat
goes off to this piece.
keep it up!! |
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 12:32:36 AM AEST
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Romantic and just amazing, loved this , especially the verse, "the moon is now my spotlight, for once i am the star.."
LOve it |
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Re: Daydreams Of The Night...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 05:50:21 AM AEST
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I take my hat off to the 3 of you.
Brilliantly done.
J. |
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