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Thank You Part 2

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:27:48 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems



You're finally letting me be
Letting me pretend
That I don't care about you
My feelings came to an end
You're letting me hide it all
Keep it all inside
So you can stay with her
Your truely perfect bride
You're finally admitting
Or, at least I think you are
That you and I don't belong together
It's best we love from afar

I know I never told you
But I'm sure you must have felt
That I still adored you
Yet if you broke up, I couldn't have dealt
I couldn't have dealt with hurting her
Not when she's been so kind
Couldn't have let you go
And leave true love behind
So I'm glad you seem to be able
To know just what I feel
We'd never be that perfect
We're a dream not meant to be real

Thank you once again...




Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-11-10 20:27:48]
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Re: Thank You Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:39:24 PM AEST
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Kiela my heart feels for you. To love someone from afar is a real heart breaker. A poem filled with anguish at not been able to be with the person your heart desires. Chin up sweet girl and may you find a love someday you can claim as your own.
*heartfelt hugs from me to you*
sue


Re: Thank You Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:12:59 PM AEST
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wonderful write..I hope everything works out for you,,I think lots of people can relate to this,,hugs eddy




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