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Looking Across This Room
Contributed by
JenJen
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Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 04:58:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I look across this room,
I see your sinful face.
Filled with much pain and emotion,
Yet you move with so much grace.
As I look across this room,
I see the tear run down your check.
You break out in nervous laughter,
Yet a hug is all you seek
As I look across this room,
You are wishing you could leave
And never turn back on everthing thats happened
Get away to grieve. . .
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-11-10 16:58:40]
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Re: Looking Across This Room
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 05:15:33 PM AEST
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short but full of emontion i hope you gave him a hug
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Re: Looking Across This Room
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 05:59:21 PM AEST
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| yep, these are everyday tragedies. we all need to recognize people's problems and help each other out. good write. |
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Re: Looking Across This Room
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:40:38 PM AEST
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Give said person the hug they need. Talk to them, just be there for them. Sometimes, thats all you can do. I really realy like this poem, and I hope you find a way to help this person.
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Re: Looking Across This Room
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by Sparda on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 02:31:57 PM AEST
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hey, its me...lol
Like ur poem, short and quite emphatical..
keep writing.
-Sparda- |
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