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A love poem
Contributed by
Poetic_Influence
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Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:08:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My love
Your kiss is so sweet
Like cherries dipped in caramel
With you I am complete
So never say farewell
Eighteen years old
And I've loved you for three
More precious than gold
Is what you are to me
Many people have tried to make this not work
And I'll admit we broke up a few times
And yes it hurt
But that was mountain that we had to climb
And now here we are
Soon to be married
I can't believe we made it this far
And all of the obsticals have been burried
Thank you my lovely
For being so true
And for putting no one above me
I love you
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Re: A love poem
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 11:03:52 AM AEST
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Re: A love poem
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by Dri on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 01:17:19 PM AEST
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this is way too sweet for me... i think i just hate people who are happily in love.
good write, though. |
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Re: A love poem
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:41:01 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written with playful imagery and sweet
sentiments.
" More precious than gold"
very nice... keep it up! |
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