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Welcome to the dead zone

Contributed by PLformalyknownasPpaul on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:05:56 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Minds blasted, consumed, spat out
Feelings numbed, or gone without
Cold, unfeeling, manipulative
Yet filled with laughter and brightly lit

Full to the brim, yet still wanting
Fools for the quick, the easy, the all encompassing
Everything can be done, everything achieved
Except the thing inside, half formed just out of reach

And I yean to spurn this cruel churn to break away and be free
But this is the world I was born into and nothings going undo the time line and the family tree
Flashes of light and warmth around the solid rock are all that is left to guide me
But I will carry on regardless and hope and toil to find another soul to complete me

Love is pure and good it well understood but you’ve heard that all before
And you hold back the yawns as your soul is torn but it will not go away
All around you its smiles and marble tiles but that won’t satisfy your hunger anymore
When will it cease?
Where is your other half the missing piece?

Welcome to the dead zone as far as I can see but do not give in or inwardly flee
Just reach out for my hand and we’ll do it together.

Copyright Â© PLformalyknownasPpaul ... [ 2005-11-10 09:05:56]
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Re: Welcome to the dead zone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 01:20:30 PM AEST
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this is so good!!! i love the emotion, the easy flow...keep writing!

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