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She'll come back to me
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
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Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:05:19 AM in AEST
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Shell come back
safly and whole,
I know shell come back to me.
Even though Ive been left
more then once before
I know shell come back to me.
My life stands still
as I await her arrival;
everyday I prey
that she is safe,
that shes ok.
I wanted to beg her
"Please dont leave me."
my last blood leave me
like all the rest.
I await her promised return
her smile returning to me
she wont stay gone;
shes not like the rest.
shell come back
just as she promised.
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Re: She'll come back to me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:33:59 AM AEST
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Do you even know what she is doing, when she is away from you, just wondering.. great write.. its very visual.. you put the emphasis on the one who leaves a lot.. well, I pray you get your promise back... someone is having a good time, why not you?
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Re: She'll come back to me
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by brownieboos on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:52:03 AM AEST
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| She'll come back to you. |
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Re: She'll come back to me
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by mjh0813 on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:34:09 AM AEST
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hope she keeps her promise to you...peace and love
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Re: She'll come back to me
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by Dri on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 04:05:35 PM AEST
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| This is really good, but all the errors are kind of distracting. |
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