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Take all of me
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:46:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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And now my thoughts have turned back to you
When seeing is believing
I believe in you
You're growing on me
Through my mind
Through my soul
Through all that I do
Through all that I know
I always knew it would be this way
I always knew it would end this way
It's always the same
I'll never leave this
You might as well get used to this
I'm never going to leave
Take what I've given you
Take all of me
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the_story_of_the_year
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2005-11-10 00:46:03]
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Re: Take all of me
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:55:47 AM AEST
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| I've felt that way sure. I feel that way now in fact though not for the reasons some would think. |
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Re: Take all of me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:13:17 AM AEST
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wow awesomely expressed.. thanks for sharing .. I enjoyed this and yeah i think everyone can relate to this .. very well expressed
JENNITTUDE |
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Re: Take all of me
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by Poetic_Influence on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:43:38 AM AEST
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| I like this, the last two line in the first verse, nice |
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Re: Take all of me
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by enigma on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:29:47 PM AEST
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...when I use to read expressions of this nature, and this might or might not have been your intent all along, I always focused on someone out there...anymore, I realize this is best directed inward...I have to 'take all of me...' 'Self' rejection is a real downer...
...it is invigorating...
enigma |
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Re: Take all of me
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:36:54 PM AEST
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| yes. |
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Re: Take all of me
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by Dri on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 04:11:55 PM AEST
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| no. |
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Re: Take all of me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 11:40:01 AM AEST
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| I think everyone has felt this way one time or another...Eddy |
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Re: Take all of me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 06:02:56 PM AEST
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I think most of us can relate to your write. A deep and well expressed write. Chin up and may things look up for you.
*hugs*
sue |
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