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Scream Of Anger
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:15:54 AM in AEST
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Scream of anger
Floats off my tongue
See the danger
Damage done
Heard is all this
Wordless rage
Lifting letters
From the page
I’ve gotta write to remain silent
Hold these words against myself
Bleed them out upon a tablet
And then put them on a shelf
What’s left inside won’t be denied
And I’ve got to let it out
So I raise my head up towards the sky
Take a breath and begin to shout
( as a )
Scream of anger
Floats off my tongue
See the danger
Damage done
Heard is all this
Wordless rage
Lifting letters
From the page
So now I’ll burn the words I’ve written
Leave no evidence behind
Just the memory of the moment
As it melts into my mind
Tomorrow holds the promise
Of another fate full day
And the path I have to follow
Seems beyond my means to change
( so a )
Scream of anger
Floats off my tongue
See the danger
Damage done
Heard is all this
Wordless rage
Lifting letters
From the page
Let it out
Set it free
Let it go
Let it be
( just a )
Scream of anger
Floating off my tongue
See the danger
Damage done
Heard is all this
Wordless rage
Lifting letters
From the page
( Aaaaaaaaaaaiiiiigh !!!!!!!! )
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:48:28 AM AEST
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| as a fellow song writer, this is very good. well constructed, and deep. i would definetely like to hear the completed work. |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:54:04 AM AEST
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| I like it nice chorus. |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by mrpeanut64 on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:32:35 AM AEST
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| well done, in these troubled times, it would be nice if we could release our pent up rage on paper and burn them away instead of acting out in anger. |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:56:43 AM AEST
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The release is wonderful isn't it? Unless of course it gets you in trouble!!!
I like the emphasis of the repitition for effect...a very vocal piece Nazzy!! |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by enigma on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:32:20 PM AEST
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...it's strong even without the music...thank god for music...
enigma |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:35:41 PM AEST
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Great piece of work Naz .. wish I could hear it. ..
Rages, stages
ripping words off of pages.
Turning anger into ash
as I toss it in the trash.
angry words fill my pages
swearing, tearing, in my rages. |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 05:24:51 PM AEST
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Yep, right there ...
"Let it out
Set it free
Let it go
Let it be..."
What you said.
D. Sapelo |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 07:04:30 PM AEST
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*Is bowled over by the vehement power of this piece*
Impressive! I love the repetition, and the strength of the images used, such as this fine stanza:
I’ve gotta write to remain silent
Hold these words against myself
Bleed them out upon a tablet
And then put them on a shelf
Another piece of brilliance, Nazzy. What a way to let that anger out!
Andrew |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:30:00 PM AEST
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Woah Nazzy... This is an awesome way to let anger out.
I'm trying to find my favourite stanza here, and have to agree with Andrew, that one is fabulous, but really it's the poem as a whole that is the best.
I love this hun,
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:51:48 PM AEST
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Okay nazzy .... I've read this over and over again and couldn't come up with quite the right words; ones grand
enough to articulate just how your talent staggers and surprises me.
--everytime !!
You have talent coming outta you like MAD !! It's positively obscene. (uh oh... I feel a quote coming on .... )
Brenda Francis said...
"If you have a talent, use it in every which way possible. Don't hoard it. Don't dole it out like a miser.
Spend it lavishly, like a millionaire intent on going broke. "
And may I say, dearest naz, the millions that you've lavished on us haven't even begun to touch the depth of
your "gift". You truly do honour us with the little bits you throw here and there. And still you have 'millions' to
spare !! If you ARE intent on going broke, I daresay you will be long dead and buried before that happens!
That is the extent of your capability.................your proficiency...................your genius .
Always in awe. Always impressed. Always humbled, am I.
~Breezy
(who is incapable of denying this, even through your protests! Deal with it !! )
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 01:34:09 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! NAZ.......I read these words to the William Tell Overture.........Boy did it ever wake me up for the day!!!
Great lyrics..........there are days when I can't yell loud enough, I'm going to keep this link, and whenever I feel like screaming I'm coming over
to read it!
Fanstastic!!!!
Warm love
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by Willofree on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 11:47:08 AM AEST
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Hi Naz,
This piece seems an excellant work of art. Really you do seem an artist with words, as you paint such a beautiful portrait with your vivid imagery. Between writing songs, poems and short stories your talent and versatility are amazing. You always seem willing to push the boundaries.
Wonderful write, I enjoyed it
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Re: Scream Of Anger
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 01:21:38 AM AEST
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WOW personally I thought this was friggin
amazing I can relate to this so much, but you
penned it with such clarity and brilliance. This
was stunning and I loved every word thanks
for sharing this Naz.
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