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open your eye's,,to me,,
Contributed by
spooky
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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we say,,,we are one,,
but it's not,,,
we say,,it's forever,,
but it's not,,
how can we say ,,
it will be alright,,,
when we dont even know,,the truth,,
even if it hit us in the face,,
we wouldn't even know
all we do,,is hope,,
we hope for the things in life,,
that engulf our hearts,,
not even myself,,
could give a prefect gift,,
,,,,,LOVE,,,,,
I know in my heart,,
what I want,,
who I want,,
where she is,,
I know,,,
but to have,,no,,,
to care,,yes,,
forever,,yes,,
is more than i could ever want,,
a prefect gift,,I couldn't give,,
a lifetime,,of gifts,,i could,,
hopeing to have,,sometimes i wish,,
a prefect gift,,to me,,
one day in time,,
is all i want,,
to show,,that it's not hard to give this,,
when you know in your heart,,
what's true,,
and what's not there,,
open your heart to the things,,
that make you happy,,
that engulfs you,,
every night,,
parts not foud in dreams,,
but in heart,,
one day,,you will see..
love is there,,it's right in front of you,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2003-01-22 12:00:00]
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Re: open your eye's,,to me,,
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:01:42 PM AEST
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| Oh Craig,this was such a touching peice,I hope they will soon open their eyes! Maybe they'll realize! Love doesnt come easy! Great write! Christina |
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Re: open your eye's,,to me,,
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:55:03 PM AEST
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| sweet write, a very value-able lesson too, keep up the great work |
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Re: open your eye's,,to me,,
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:51:46 PM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: open your eye's,,to me,,
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:32:58 AM AEST
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Hey, Craig this was very good you sound confused and down a lot like I feel welcome to the club *shakes his hand* I hope u find your answers.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: open your eye's,,to me,,
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by wordsy on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 06:41:34 AM AEST
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In all the universe, only love can take two wrongs and make it right. Then it's between you, me and infinity.
A very good write,
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Re: open your eye's,,to me,,
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by OreO on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 04:25:22 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem Craig...i love reading your poetry it says to much to me.....
Take my mask and open my eyes..
Crawled over my walls i have so high..
Seep through my soul and carry me
So i can love you eternally...
Come what may...i will behold
The beauty in you...as i unfold..
Cherish love...throughout all time...
So i shall be your Valentine...
*hugsss*..your poetry is so beautiful...and takes my breath away ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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