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its not if i
Contributed by
ebooibo
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Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 11:31:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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its not fun any more when your laugh turns to tears.
its not fun any more when all you see are dreams that will never be real.
its not fun any more when you think that you have something so perfect that turns out to be
nothing more than a mist that is so unclear.
its not fun any more when you put your all into something which in the end the out come is nothing...
its not fun when all you feel is hurt and pain.
its not fun dying with out a cause. its not fun any more when death becomes your best friend.
its not fun seeing someone you love oh so dear fall for someone else.
its not fun any more to see people that you were so close to, wish nothing but bad things on you.
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ebooibo
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2005-11-09 23:31:48]
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Re: its not if i
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:43:24 AM AEST
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| these are amazing! thanks for writing them. |
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Re: its not if i
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:47:27 AM AEST
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| I like those thank you! |
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Re: its not if i
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by Kazzy1231 on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:22:07 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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