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WAR:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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ON THE BATTLE FIELDS I SAW,
MEN RUNNING BOMBS BLOWING UP,
BULLETS FLYING AS SOME DUCK.
STILL THEY SUCK IT UP.
THE BULLETS HIT WITH A TREMENDOUS FORCE.
THE PAIN HIT LIKE A GALLOPING HORSE,
LAYING IN THE DIRT COLD AS HELL.
FIRST IN THE LEG MOVEING UP LIKE A SPELL.
THE SCREAMS OF YOUNG MEN GETTING KILLED
CAN SOME ONE PLEASE GIVE HIM A PILL.
HEART TWIST AS ONE MAN SAID,"WHEN WILL IT BE OVER"
ANOTHER SAID NOT YET GO TO BED.
THE SCREAMS GROW LOUD AS OTHERS FELL,"MUDER ME PLEASE I CAN'T BEAR THIS HELL.
EYES GROW COLD AS THE NIGHT MOVE ON,
BOMBS STILL FALLING LIKE A DRUMMER SONG.
AS THE CRIES DIE DOWN SOMEONE SAID"I WISH I WAS HOME IN MY OWN BED".
BULLETS FLYING PASSING OVER OUR HEADS SOUNDING LIKE WIND INBETWEEN TWO MOUNTAIN EDGE.
BUT STILL THEY FIGHT AN MOVE ON, VICTORY IS A SOLDIERS SONG.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2003-01-22 11:40:00]
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Re: WAR:
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:52:03 PM AEST
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| good write, I don't believe in war either, |
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Re: WAR:
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 05:45:35 PM AEST
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You always write with such conviction Richard...well done.
Chrissie |
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Re: WAR:
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:19:07 PM AEST
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| HI VALERIE,THANK YOU VERY MUCH AM GLAD YOU LIKE THIS THANKS. |
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Re: WAR:
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:21:44 PM AEST
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HI CHRISSIE,
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS I TRUELY WRITE FROM MY HEART. |
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Re: WAR:
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 04:20:08 PM AEST
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A DULL THUD
CHARLIE'S GOT ONE
MY BEST PAL
GONE
A MOMENTS SORROW
THEN RELIEF
THANK GOD IT WASN'T ME |
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