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I shall no longer waltz in love..
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:21:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How empty one feels without hope, even if it was a fools hope.
what I once held in you so high above me, nothing
something we shared that was almost so real, gone
All the dreams I played in my mind over and over again, Dead
I could not live my lying wishing forever
I wish now, that I could have been
No more sleepless nights of delight, waiting for our next conversation
No more holding each other in the outcome of any situation
My heart has been freed from the bars of desire and love
at the cost of my smile, it shall never be so bright
I gave up the best thing in my life, for freedom
and I would have given that freedom up, for you
I struggle to breath for my throat closes in sorrow
I dream of a day, one of purity and live that can only bring love
for my thought of love only contains you and with it you, my heart
am I foolish to cling on to this fake love?
My wonder shall continue for eternity to come
even if I will seal my lips, for I shall ask no more questions
I shall waltz alone, and remember how it felt when you were near
I shall waltz alone, with a shadow that was once yours
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Re: I shall no longer waltz in love..
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:33:15 PM AEST
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WOW!! I love this!!! I can truly understand how you feel.... Good write..
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Re: I shall no longer waltz in love..
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:18:10 AM AEST
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wow this is a very sad and beautiful write.. this is a masterpiece of lost love.. I really like this one.. great job.. I love how you expressed this
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Re: I shall no longer waltz in love..
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by VampryssCherry on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 01:13:06 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful and powerful. And she is a fool not to realize how great you are dear. |
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Re: I shall no longer waltz in love..
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:15:28 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is beautiful! I love it! |
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