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Mourn
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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dressed in winter sunset
she beckoned from the Blue
my fatal Fuccubus
an eternity spent in tri-petaled foreplay
no climax in sight
she stood as the Last Ride
in my abusement park
a mushroom cloud of passion
my mushroomhead devoured
by her cryptorchid, blooming in death's valley
my glowspyrm grew cold and furious
in her nine month tomb with a view
til it tore itself free
(with a splatter of gore dappled fluid)
destroying itself in it's haste
for fifty nights, she wept a drowning pool
dead, in a galaxy of pain
til i found her on the fifty-first mourning
cold, silent, and lifeless
her wrists chewed through
by the beast of unsurmountable sorrow
bespeckled with every hue of hell
a rainbow of agony in the undreaming night
Copyright ©
Cancer
... [
2003-01-22 11:20:00]
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Re: Mourn
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:17:28 PM AEST
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Wow this was great! Very deep,sad poetry!
Keep em coming! Christina |
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Re: Mourn
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 05:00:13 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful... |
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Re: Mourn
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:30:07 AM AEST
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This was very vivid and somewhat disturbing, but I enjoyed it. Keep these up.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Mourn
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 10:36:36 PM AEST
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| HI.........sandy |
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