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Good Bye
Contributed by
dark_angel_of_poetry
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Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:24:40 PM in AEST
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I love your eyes
your red-brown hair
the feeling I get
when I stare
I love your personality
I love it when you look at me
I love it when you say hello
but I'll hate it when you have to go
I hate that you'll be leaving soon
I hate that I can't stop thinking of you
I hate that my love is immeasurable
I hate that your heart is impenetrable
I hate that you don't love me back
and that you I can't make you understand, that
I hate that I can't sleep at night
and I hate that I have to say... goodbye.
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Re: Good Bye
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:42:43 PM AEST
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Very sweet write, people come in and out of lives, it's usually something we can't prevent, doesn't stop the pain though does it? Great write.
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Re: Good Bye
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by SeanMcHaney on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:46:03 PM AEST
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| Someone once told me that people come into our lives for a reason, a season, and a lifetime, and only time will tell the difference. |
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Re: Good Bye
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by weepingprophet on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:19:18 PM AEST
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---"of revenge" was deleted by the moderators and can now be veiwed only in my journal---
~weepingprophet |
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Re: Good Bye
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by dark_angel_of_poetry on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:24:56 PM AEST
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| That comment just made me really confused. |
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Re: Good Bye
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:23:01 AM AEST
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this is very well expressed and a good write.. people leave our lives for reasons but maybe you and your friend can keep in touch.. try keeping contact with her.. it will work out for the best either way though .. awesome job at the poem though
JENNITTUDE |
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