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Death Show
Contributed by
fredsmith
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:20:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Death Show
Eternal pain,
Its now time.
See the blood stain,
This is my crime.
I’m sick of them,
They’re to blame.
Causing the problem,
Death will now claim.
I’m all alone,
Looking at the blade.
Beginning to moan,
As I start to decade.
Seeing the blood,
Asking god why.
Tears begin to flood,
I don’t want to die.
Is this the end,
Am I going to hell.
No angel to send,
Oh this is swell.
This was fun,
I guess its time to go.
Pulling out the gun,
Ending my show.
By Fred Smith
Copyright ©
fredsmith
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2005-11-09 19:20:34]
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Re: Death Show
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:23:45 PM AEST
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Powerful, sad and emotional. I hope this isn't about you, and if it is, I pray you seek help, if not from your friends, than from those of us here on the site.
Very good poem, written on a very upsetting subject.
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Re: Death Show
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:41:26 PM AEST
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Do tell me this was just a poem *hugs* I know what this feels like, I've been there... don't go down that road if you can help it. Suicide's a permanent solution to a temporary problem. It helps no one, not even you. *hugs*
If this was just a poem, you set out and accomplished what you meant to. You scared me for your life for sure! *hugs*
Love ya,
~Kiela~
(who's honestly been there, knows this is the last thing you want to hear, but... please don't do it, it'll hurt more people than you think) |
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