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my cue
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:18:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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crying in the
silence
wating for my cue
waitng for something to make sense
where i sit
light flickers on the wall
a single candle lit
the sharp pain on my wrists
slowly getting stronger
i want to finish
and yet i wait longer
blood hits the floor
my soul stained and sore
"dont stop now"
the blade goes deeper
my pain tore through the silence
the candle fades
mascara runs
nothing made sense
my cue is yet to come
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
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2005-11-09 18:18:27]
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Re: my cue
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by weepingprophet on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:38:10 PM AEST
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keep posting. writing is another way to slit your wrists and to me it has proved more satisfying. With time you will grow a skilled dominance over your emotions and release a hidden accuracy in portraying those caged demons.
~i am ten percent sorrow and ninety percent silence~weepingprophet |
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Re: my cue
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:53:50 PM AEST
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i love it, a very powerful poem filled with so much emotion. well done
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Re: my cue
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 09:54:21 AM AEST
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its very good i like it keep up the good writes
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