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Unchanged
Contributed by
Evening_Star
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Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:13:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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No matter how my life has changed
You always seem there to haunt it
You linger in the dark corners
Where my eyes they do not see
You know I am always there
I don't pretend to hide from you
I just want to keep living my life
There is still so much more
You want from me
That I am unwilling to give
You keep trying to persuade me
But I still remain ever vigilant
Unflinching and unchanged
Copyright ©
Evening_Star
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2005-11-09 18:13:03]
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Re: Unchanged
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by weepingprophet on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:04:54 PM AEST
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to me- a presumptious person today- this write seems extremely religious. i hate playing the religion card but when you speak of omnipresence not through memory it makes me thing of a higher power. If you believe in God just give it to Him. whatever you are holding onto is worthless-regardless. what does anything amount to in the end? we are what we purchase-hollow satsifaction.
~here i am kneeling forever between repentance and rebellion. kneeling forever between fragile and broken. between choices and choosing... i'm losing. IF HEAVEN WEEPS IT NEVER CEASES IN MY NAME~weepingprophet |
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Re: Unchanged
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:20:53 PM AEST
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Deep, and true. I'm glad you aren't giving in, stay strong, and keep writing.
~Riisa |
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Re: Unchanged
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:45:46 PM AEST
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I hope this poem wasn't about a guy/girl pressuring you to do something you don't want to... because if it is just stick to your guns hunni *hugs*
Wonderful poem
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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