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candyapplevomit-wax.
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:15:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Sun-dappled, star-kiss’ed.
Fermented guns shoot blanks,
like rotting ferns.
Pen and ink: quill tattoos, only semi-
permanent, like hearts and sighs;
like ships of bones – leaking.
Faces painted up, a sad clown in a jester’s cap.
Whitewash: picket fences and geisha eyes.
Freckled lips belie your calamity.
Paperclip novices and bear-trapped wounds;
regal appliances outwit your electric currants,
brain matter – conductive.
Conductors; of train wrecks, your choir;
a chorus of angels, erupting – volcanoes or doves.
Mix a paste of glitter and rice, pigeon slaughter.
Vomit-wax (ænd wane),
crimson tides roiling: lividity.
Sweetly scented propaganda
gavottes from fibbing tongues,
good, but not enough – far from those untold.
Copyright ©
blackmarker
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2005-11-09 16:15:05]
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Re: candyapplevomit-wax.
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 01:43:42 PM AEST
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Well, I am honored to be the first to comment on this wonderful write. It was different...totally refreshing. Way to go.
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Re: candyapplevomit-wax.
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by Munchkin on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 03:40:59 PM AEST
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| Definately different. Pretty good though, nice word choices |
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