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Dead Inside
Contributed by
Kellros
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:07:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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An spiralling omnious void,
devoid from cares and caring,
death as stone cold graves,
engraved in dead burnt wood,
heart of shades.
Life`s a play, like an actor in an useless game,
an endless struggle of a meaningless cause,
finding death then a sudden pause,
you should have seen it coming,
but you`re too late to change,
experience
misfortunes, endevours and now just pain.
Confronting fears as it tears into this flesh,
through the years scars have become dry rivers
which bloodred fluids spurt and exhaust
to the terrible trust of shame.
Dig head into grave,
not scared of life,
because life is just a game.
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2005-11-09 15:07:12]
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Re: Dead Inside
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:23:25 PM AEST
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interesting write very picturisque in its quality
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Re: Dead Inside
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:26:11 PM AEST
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Graphic an interesting, sad yet angry. Good write, I like it.
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