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Tired
Contributed by
JenJen
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Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:54:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm tired of these surroundings
I'm tired of all this mess
It's caused too much distruction
All I want to do is confess
I feel like I'm in a battle field
Bombs are going off around me
It's time for me to go now
And maybe I'll finally be free. . .
-xXx-
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JenJen
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2005-11-09 08:54:58]
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Re: Tired
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by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 09:04:54 AM AEST
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| Wowie! Jenny very good, i love the rhyming ^__^ and the emotion in it. Tut tut jenny for doing it in french but Keep up the good work!! |
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Re: Tired
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by wordsy on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 09:18:44 AM AEST
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A nicely delivered ditty.
as always,
wordsy. |
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