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The Sound of My Screams
Contributed by
onedysturbdchick
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:25:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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madness dancing in my mind,
scattered thoughts that intertwine
confusing images flutter around,
sickly moans stifle the sound
of my screams...
monstrous darkness comes to feed,
evil sickness plants its seed
madmen whisper words of hate,
while the voices inside decide my fate
and i scream....
twisted web of sadness i weave,
while ones we've come to trust deceive
lost pleas scattered into dust,
while the insanity seeks for which it lusts....
it's the sound of my screams......
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2005-11-09 04:25:51]
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Re: The Sound of My Screams
(User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:50:31 AM AEST
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Well I just want to thank you again for commenting
on my write it is much appreciated and I see we both
can relate a little when it comes to seeing the darker
sides of life. This write flowed so well it was like
sometimes I knew what the next line was before I
read it. It sucked me in so fast it was like I was
reading your mind or hearing you say it out loud.
You write so elegant about death and each stroke
of your pin leaves a dark scare on the mind that
makes you stop and contemplate about life. Take care
and keep up the writes….Steve
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Re: The Sound of My Screams
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:32:48 PM AEST
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wow, it's very dark and written very well too.
the imagery in it was vivid and easy to see
because of it's well crafted wording.
my favourite lines were:
twisted web of sandess i weave
while ones we've come to trust deceive...
lost pleas scattered into dust,
while the insanity seeks for which it lusts..
it's the sound of my screams..
very nice
keep it up |
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