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Promise me......
Contributed by
Crimsonflame
on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 09:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your touch heals my wounded soul,
Your smile ignites my destroyed spirit,
Your warmth soothes my tired body,
Your love draws my poison away,
Dont promise me you wont hurt me,
Humans cant help but hurt one another,
Dont promise me only laughter,
My tears want to fall sometimes,
Dont promise me only the best of you,
I want to love all of you,
Good or bad,I want to love you,
But promise me,you will be there for me,
For that's a promise you will never ever break,
If you really,truly love me,
Finally,promise me this,
No matter what,
You will piece back together,
Every shattered piece,
Of my broken heart.
Copyright ©
Crimsonflame
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2005-11-08 21:15:42]
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Re: Promise me......
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 09:19:17 PM AEST
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| what an emotional plea..this is brilliantly expressed...i can feel it in your words...the intensity of the plea....absolutely amazing. |
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Re: Promise me......
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by Wicked on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 09:23:53 PM AEST
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| Really felt this poem. Truly written well in my opinion :). |
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Re: Promise me......
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 09:40:06 PM AEST
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Such a sweet poem, the emotion of a found true love. Very emotion filled, over flowing with honesty and beauty, a most pleasurable read. Amazing write. I'm really looking forward to more.
-Cassy |
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Re: Promise me......
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:28:48 AM AEST
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Wow, this was awsome. I love the whole thing. You expressed love amazingly. This is definitely one of the best love poems I've ever read.
Take care.
David |
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