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A Change for Nothing
Contributed by
memories_mist
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Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:28:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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halting my tongue, being headstrong
no word from you,what have I done wrong?
I sit with friends that blabber, tonite words are few
my thoughts seem to escape back to you
meaningless fights we should have outgrew
lingering memories, my heart withdrew
urges within, your interest seemed renewed
my head was filled with deceit and I came unglued
empty words, shadowed and feared
you sat there and grinned, and I'm the one weird?
I am ready for you this time I do whats right
being with me isn't your God-given right
I will stand strong, not give in to your demands
take back what is mine,like I originally planned
forgiveness you say, where would you start?
once I trusted you with my soul, my heart
echos of words that haunt me, daunting and true
memories once vibrant turn wilted and I bid adieu.
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2005-11-08 19:28:26]
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Re: A Change for Nothing
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:54:21 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this. thank you. |
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Re: A Change for Nothing
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 08:14:59 PM AEST
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I like your write alot. A deep, very well expressed piece of poetry. A tale of a love that went wrong. Time will heal all wounds no matter how big or how small. Chin up and may love reign in your heart again real soon.
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Re: A Change for Nothing
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 09:24:53 PM AEST
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this is a great write..i loved reading this...thank you for posting this.
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Re: A Change for Nothing
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 03:15:32 PM AEST
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| i liked it, i like how you stand up for yourself too. good luck, you'll find someone better. |
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