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Words Of Us
Contributed by
tacit_pain
on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 06:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Memorys of us
Brings tears to my eyes
I can't help but think
All your words were just lies
Words of marriage
Words of life
The words "I love you"
Then me as your wife
We had it all planned out
Then from me is was taken away
I read the note you slipped me
And still I don't know what to say
Last night
I cried myself to sleep
I don't know what to do
But sit here and weep
I'm tired of crying
Atlast no more
I'm going to sleep one last time
But on the floor
I cried myself to sleep
But the color was red
For the last time
My eternal bed
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2005-11-08 18:33:56]
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Re: Words Of Us
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by memories_mist on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:33:52 PM AEST
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| A very emotional write with a sense of great pain entwined in it. I really liked this one and look forward to reading more. |
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Re: Words Of Us
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:52:25 PM AEST
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| good write, definitely at such a young age. |
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Re: Words Of Us
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 11:13:10 PM AEST
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| for an 8th grader, you certainly did have a lot more talent than ive seen from many writers on this site. excellent work to say the least. i liked the title most in this, i think it was creative enough to even be the centerpiece. |
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