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I Want
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 06:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to see your lovely face,
I want to feel your warm embrace,
To feel your arms around my waist,
I want you back again.
I want to share with you a kiss,
I want to once again feel that bliss,
To taste the lips I've grown to miss,
I want you back again.
I want to stroke your silky hair,
I want to hold you without a care,
To smell your perfume, and know you're there,
I want you back again.
I want my love to hold me near,
I want to be with whom I hold dear,
To hear your voice soft in my ear,
I want you back again.
My darling, my love, I miss you so.
Absence, as they say, does make love grow.
I can't tell you how much I'll have to show,
When I have you back again.
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2005-11-08 18:31:03]
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Re: I Want
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 08:06:48 PM AEST
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A touching, heartfelt piece. Your style as to rhyme is improving too, I must say. The rhyming here is pretty concrete.
Keep at it.
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Re: I Want
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 09:47:16 PM AEST
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| If this doesn't make me want to cry, I don't know much that will... |
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Re: I Want
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by LostAmbition on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 12:18:30 AM AEST
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hey i want this too! lol!
she got a sister???? :p
just playing, this was good
keep it up! |
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