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brainwashed
Contributed by
grim6669
on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:04:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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sick suffering,
down underneath,
mind is bleeding,
twisted lies,
come and find,
the truth i hide,
that dwells below,
all i despise,
lies melt away,
truth bleeds through,
out with the old,
and in with the new,
little secrets i hide from you,
when you hear this,
you pain's more blue,
stomach churns,
mind aches and burns,
you've had your chance,
so say goodbye,
and give somebody,
else a try,
stop your smiles,
this is no game,
you're dealing with me,
and i'm insane,
i'm fu**ed up,
in my twisted head,
you'll think about me,
and what i've said,
you'll think about me,
when you're in bed,
trying to sleep,
all through the night,
but you can't,
cause you're in fright,
i'm in your thoughts,
like all the time,
i'm brainwashing,
you fu**ing mind!
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Re: brainwashed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:19:20 PM AEST
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Wow!! sure you are not my evil twin lol..
wonderful write..feelin in this just explode with the ring of truth for me.. keep it up
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: brainwashed
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by Drmbeliever on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:45:38 PM AEST
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| Nice one! keep it up, i like this stuff! :) *heather* |
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Re: brainwashed
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:50:40 PM AEST
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The poem is creative, and very intense and powerful. It seems to transition from you experiencing the most pain to you doing better and the other party feeling the most pain and loss.
A thought provoking write
Good job, Amber
Will |
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Re: brainwashed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:16:03 AM AEST
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This is such a sincere poem, I am sure many feelings feel out there... good write..
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: brainwashed
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:55:44 PM AEST
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| Hi, just wanted to say thxs for reading my stuff and after trying to return the favor, I must say that I have just read all your poems and have to say I enjoyed every single one. Your very gifted. keep writing your peoms and i'll keep reading them. Laterz |
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Re: brainwashed
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by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 11:23:25 PM AEST
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I really like this!! What an excellent write! I am looking forward to reading more.
ES |
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